Thanks for your comment! I'm currently working on part 2, a whole new and longer story, with first and third perspectives, two playable characters and a variety of new companions. It'll take a while, but soon I'll release a free demo with the first chapters.
I agree that the production quality must improve, in fact I'm a writer still learning to design and to program. I hope to improve noticeably in the second part, thanks to comments like yours.