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Going through the intro, I se "her" is being used when indicating ownership or relation to a male. Example: "But in the end he got her punishment".
The correct way should be "But in the end he got his punishment"
(Though, on that note, I would personally phrase it as the following: "But in the end, he got the punishment he deserved" - Looks a bit cleaner in my opinion)

I would advice to look through the intro again and check for all these instances of his/her, as there are several

Now with the unpleasant out of the way, I'll wish you good wind moving forward with the game. I have only just started playing, but it looks interesting so far.
Good day/evening

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Yes! Thanks! Finally someone reports spelling errors to me! In my defense, I'll say what Lisapi said in discord: "Ugh... Did you found a misspelling master? Don't be surprised, Keisi is not a native English speaker so you can find spelling errors. At least I hope are not too painful for your eyes! Like when Keisi gets naked in front of me... my eyes!!!!!! Just kidding hehe"

But now seriously, I can differentiate between he/she, his/ her, but I made the stupid mistake of completely replacing  a few words and it got out of control in some ways (if I remember correctly, there are almost 4000 words in total for now).

I appreciate your comment sir, I will review the introduction again to correct those errors and include it in the version of bugfixes that I am preparing.

If you want to add any more spelling errors, please, if you wish, comment them here or wherever you see fit. Thank you!