Hey Labyor,
Cool to see your finally getting serious about starting your gaming development! I love the fact that you are taking feedback, and making revisions based on the comments! (Way to get started in the world of Agile Software Development!) I can't wait to see what you do next. I'll be following your progress, of course. :)
Good Luck, in this contest...but more importantly, have fun as you learn this new skill.
-Digasi