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The game is good but needs a lot of work. There are a couple of things that I noticed while playing that lowered the quality of the game.

1. Text being cut off the chatbox. There are some chats that are cut off and don't continue onto the next chatbox. That's really annoying to see because sometimes you can't finish a certain conversation or a thought a character had without it cutting off. 

2. The menu. The menu is good for now but like for the first issue, certain words or phrases are cut off. Also, when you equip something, you see your character's name and the back button highlighted in the same box. It looks bizarre because the word back is cut off and it just doesn't look good at all. 

3. Bug when having sex with Savannah where it can't download the character image.

4. The writing in this game needs to be looked over. There are typos and such in conversations as well as improper gender definitions. For example, I chose Astris and when I was done with the sex scene, the character called her a him. It continued to her being classified as a them next and it just made the whole after-sex scene uncomfortable.

I really see a lot of potential in this. I liked the text version you guys had before so I was looking forward to the rehaul you were planning on doing. I know you guys can do better and I can't wait to see what the final product will turn out to be.