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This is long and I hope that I can enjoy the game but it does not give a good first impression tl;dr: the prologue needs to be and definitely can be shorter

U really really REALLY need to shorten the prologue. I'm playing it for the first time and it's becoming a chore to get through but I have to if I want to know the whole story and the 30min version doesn't feel like enough. This is bad since it's the first impression and that's the most important

- so much of being told how much the MC is ugly can be removed (once the fingers are pointing at him on the park bench I was long past saying"I get it"

- since I'm never sure what to do exactly once I can start playing l, I feel like entire days could be removed with a bit more direction

It's something that should be worked on asap since it's the first impression and that can lose u lots of potential players

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I'm creating a game that I think is fun. I personally like the prologue but I can understand that it's not to everyone's tastes. It's not meant to be taken too seriously.

There are certain players that might not like it but others do like the prologue. If it's not your thing there is an option to skip it entirely or even an option to skip half of it. That's already quite a consensus I've made there.

The world is pretty big and there's a quest log that tells you where to go which opens after the prologue. Not sure how far you've got into the game but I hope you enjoyed the rest of the game.