There is much to love here, its really well presented and Im excited to see what you're going to do with this. I do, as always, have an issue with game that maybe you can clarify. What kind of game are you making? When it was initially pitched I remember it being about the journey and that it was focused on that rather than anything too challenging. Every level that I came across was lovely and I was feeling relaxed, soaking in the atmosphere, listening to the music and wham! I was killed. Is this what your going for? Hoikei your level showed a lot of love and attention to iteration as did Tamar's. Davy, I can see what you're doing here and it needs refinement. They rest of you, where is your work.
Oh and the dash not on the shift, its on the R Shift and now I know why I was struggling!