So just went through the entire game and love the content so far. The story so far I like and there were scenes of comedy that I laughed at (particularly with the Bro Jimmy). During the tense emotional scenes (Fara and Luna's) in the story development also pulled at the heart string and overall really like the approach of the game so far.
What I do have concern for the game is in the grammar. During some of the dialogue scenes, I had to read it two to three times in order to get the correct sentence grammar across as there are sometimes wrong word placement and such. I would recommend using one of the many online free grammar programs to run the script through to identify and help edit the story through. Maybe try Grammarly or something along those line.