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Eat Trash. Be Free.

Play as a gang of suburban animals trying to survive under the boot of humanity. · By Monday Cox

Typos spotted

A topic by Bruno Bord created Mar 10, 2021 Views: 141 Replies: 1
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Hello all. I've just downloaded the PDFs and for your information, I've spotted a few typos.
Maybe if other readers find more they can add to this topic?
see ya!


From the ETBF Visitor's guide.

Page 5: "Spring. The seasonss" (with 2 "s")

Page 12: (maybe not a typo, might be intentional, but I'm mentionning it anyway) "The Congregation works with liaisons, so you rarely meet. So you rarely meet actual members." As I understand it, it could just be a single sentence.

Page 16: it looks like the presentation paragraph is not entirely in italics.

Pages 17: A prototype [..] was discovered by some Humane middle school students discovered a prototype of Colonel's [..]"... Probably redundant.

Page 17 (again): « They stole it for what they call a "Science fair » ; the double-quote is not closed.

Page 22: the expression "No one really knows about them" is somehow repeated with "No one knows much about them". Maybe this needs rephrasing.

Page 23: "Safehouses (X)". What is X?

Page 29: "Blow up the townhall(24)" I think it misses a space before the opening parenthesis.