Hey! Just finished playing the game and I liked the overall idea! The sprite art was very appealing and the pinks and purples worked well together! I will say though, the grammar was a little off and made it hard to follow the story :(. I know the Renpy Reddit could definitely help with that if you're looking for beta readers or anything! Can't wait to see you improve in the future, as the ending said this would be one of many projects to come.
hello! Thank you for your review! I do intended to improve more on this game in the future prehaps even try to change the format to an adventure game as i think I could get ideas across better. Currently I am working on a second demo project so im definitely looking on improving my writing and overall story telling preformance. Your critique is much appreciated!