Hi, we just tried your visual novel. We love the art style so much, especially the moon! The lighting was great as well. For the story, for such a small project, we can see the depth in it. Love how you structured the story. Having different perspective of the story-line is almost like watching a movie! Although, we are quite unsatisfied how the story ends. We would love to see how is it going between Helen and Victor and what actually is going on. The story kind of lack self-explanatory point. We had to create our own understanding. There's some improvements suggestion we would like to share:
- Fixing some typos.
- An indicator to progress, often we were left unknowingly that we need to click to progress.
- Optimization by converting the images from PNG to Webp format.
- Archiving your project during 'building distribution' in Ren'py to avoid someone from stealing your artwork.
- Implement a game icon instead of using the default Ren'py icon.
One other thing, can you share with us how you made the dialog pauses before it proceeds?
Last, good job, keep it up!