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Like the world building so far, nice and descriptive. The riddles are fun, though the potential answers could be a bit trickier (mainly riddle 2) You've got more of a passive voice in the first two or three passages, would be good to rearrange them to be more active like the rest of the story.

Hope you decide to continue this!!

Yeah I definitely wanted to make the answers more trickier and add a couple of more options just so that it's not limited to two so I shall work on that and keeping the passiveness more constant! I feel like it'll be interesting if I continue this forward so I'm pretty certain that I will. Thank you so much!