Art looks great, although the male narrator was surprisingly loud at times compared to the female voices. Also, I hope it was just because this seems like a preview of sorts, but all three choices that were given being false choices? Very bad look. Don't give me the choice to do or not do something and then just end up saying "you need to do it though". That kind of useless interactivity is incredibly annoying. If for example with the slimes it'd go "they're not that strong and drop valuable loot, are you sure you don't want to fight them?" and then respect that I don't want to fight them right then, that'd be one thing but as it stands...
I'm still looking forward to where this goes because it does look interesting and those two issues are the only problems I have with it (maybe apart from the slight inconvenience of clicking on the hide/reveal buttton once the text is hidden advancing the text too, when I might want to look at the picture and then reread the text).