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I just finished the game and i like it. Just have some i think minor complaints. 1st is the MC’s Dck. its girth is too thin for its length lol, and the sides made it look like a bicycle/motorcycle handle because of the waviness. 2nd is the grammatical mistakes, I know you’re aware of this problem but im still gonna leave it here. 3rd I know that the MC is a Mommy’s boy and his cringey personality is for comedy but sometimes I can’t stop cringing when he shouts “WOOHOO” in sex scene and Playing a toy car at the age of 19 in a school? I know its for the comedic aspect of the game but its just too cringey for me. And lastly the feedback about the narration that you implemented. I think its unnecessary to be honest. I didn’t have any problem reading it without the narrations. And the change about the MC’s thoughts dialogue box, instead of naming it “My thoughts” change it to whoever’s thoughts we’re viewing and just change the color of the letters to grey, to indicate that its a thought or just turn it back to how it was cuz the previous one is fine with the Parenthesis. Anyway I like the game so far, I can’t wait for the next update. These are my only complaints you dont have to rush fixing it if you’re going to fix it but. Please rework the MC’s Dck XD