I really love the story book feel of this and how each scene has its own art. It's definitely a lot of work, but the end result is very beautiful! The soundtrack is so soothing and the art is beautiful.
As Amberbaum mentioned, the text is little buggy and sometimes doesn't appear at all. I also feel like some endings could've been merged together as they were the same, but told things differently or went in more detail. Other than that, I love the story a lot and the characters are so cute.
Keep going on, I'm excited to see what you do in future!