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Thank you so much for your comment, Mukjz!
I agree. The story does feel a bit fast in the demo. Later on, I'll make some changes to make this side of the story feel more natural and, still, a little unpredictable.
Right now, my main focus is to bring new content to the story and redo some of the previous artwork.
Also, thanks for pointing out the typos! I'm going to check it all up before posting the new version! 😅