Okay so my one biggest complaint about this game is in particular with chapter 1. I get that depending on the platform to which you release your games you have to be careful about the type of relationships your characters have with each other in particular with relationships involving blood relationships or not. However it makes it a very difficult read to initially start the game cause the entire flow is unnatural. Especially since everyone is referred to as either landlady or landlord. At the very least in the very beginning the mc's male influence should be referred to as father otherwise who the hell gave birth to him cause by law unless they are his adoptive parents no legal body would allow a landlord or landlady to raise a child. I know by now would be too late for you to update the story or coding for chapter 1-9 and especially for just one user complaining about it but you should allow user to decide relationship of initial characters for more integration into the story from the start. Other then that maybe getting someone to assist with proof reading and editing text cause the flow is also a little choppy at times. But other then that seems like a great game just a few comment on things that could be improved.