Remarkable: Not gonna lie - this caught me by surprise. At first, I was like ok, I'm going to be walking through some rooms with pre-build 3D models plopped in. But then you made it both personal and relatable and vulnerable and I was charmed.
Needs Improvement: The scale feels too big for the size and speed of the player. It also makes the world feel more sparse than it probably should be (like, that's the opposite of what a game like this should feel like!) Also, the assets and scripts aren't very well organized - I'd definitely use more folders and empty game objects to hold all that stuff.
Successful: Enjoyable to explore, personal, poetic.