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I can definitely tell you put a lot of effort into writing. I personally think The Great Gatsby adaptation wouldn't be a easy task to do, but I think you did a great job! I really liked the What if... setting. I think more options would be nice, but I think it'd be hard to twist around. The story is already great! I liked how some tags led you to more information. Some tags, however, kind of confused me whether it'd give me more info or just proceed to the next story. Overall, I had fun reading it!