hi todd
The protagonist acts the way I would expect Dorian Gray to act! You're doing a good job of capturing his tone in an approachable way. As for choices, I felt that I had a BUNCH of options and agency in the first conversation, but relatively fewer in the following ones — this obviously ties into pacing. I found it a bit inconsistent, and I'd like to spend either less time on the initial conversation or more time in subsequent ones.
-jess