Very engaging pacing!! I feel like each passage leaves just enough mystery, and inspires just enough curiosity, for me to want to click each option... that being said, if you're trying to do the entire plot of the book, the party seems out of scope (too detailed) The writing itself is very engaging and the choices are interesting, but I want to get to new places just a little bit quicker. Also, just a small proofreading note: certain sentences/paragraphs are a bit redundant. This is more of a nitpick than anything.