First off, I like the project right away I think. The pacing, the amount of interaction and other stuff feel great for me. I guess the reason could be I am getting a little bit the same vibe as watching the Gatsby movie. The description of the main room and the tone of the language are all really good at this stage.
I feel pretty immersed as the protagonist of the story, a stranger who attend a random party held by some mystery guy, and I am just trying to socialized and finding out who Gatsby is, kinda like what Tobey Maguire would do. Overall I am getting the vibe from both the movie and maybe some classic escape-room-games where I am trying to learn the surroundings throughout the entire game.
To be complete honest, maybe I cannot give any constructive suggestions because I like everything I have been seeing, and I am really looking forward to the ending.