Hello, Todd Howard. I would like to remind you that I am not buying Skyrim again, but I will do my best to remain civil. For the chess club, Todd.
1) The protagonist is interesting-i get the feeling after saying that i "love the portrait" That hes hiding something from the player themselves. By being nice to everyone, it sets himself up as this awful liar. by being mean to everyone, it sets him off as a narcissist, inside and out. Very good twist, as always!
2) nope-all of the choices were pretty good and seemed to consider things a player would think of at the moment
3)The pacing is good-some of the paragraphs end up being large chunks, but they read very quickly due to smart choices in wording.