I may not read it immediately, but when the time comes (if I had to do a twine project again) I’ll keep this in mind. Thanks for both the feedback and the books you told me about. :). I’ll fix the errors that are in my twine game (re-sizing and correcting the answers). Although there may not be a point in doing this (because it’s for a game jam) I think we can all agree that it’s important to make a game polished, whether it’s big or small.
So then again, thanks for all this :) this is actually my first game to get comments on.
Plus I’m sure you’ll get a job in no time 🙂👍