Such good storytelling and environment building happening in this game with some great art. You’ve got some real skill in building and maintaining a story cohesively. I would encourage you to find ways to bring more meaningful choice into your narrative to give the player more immersion or engagement. Utilize the platform to make other details come to life: Coding affects, cosmetic design choices, and sounds for immersion are all things you could play with to bring your stories to life. Take risks and experiment! Well done and good work. I’m looking forward to see what you bring to your next game!