The addition of sounds is just wonderful. It gives the game and subject matter a boost of life and realness, and the ones you chose are very chef’s kiss. They had me feeling a great sense of immersion and complimented the simplicity of the design and art perfectly. I particularly liked how you paid attention to details like making the word ‘squint’ blurry so that I had a natural reaction to blink a few times and squint— very clever. My only note is to consider more interactivity in your passages. There’s a lot of story to read thus many opportunities where players could click to reveal or pop-up new passages or dialogue so that they feel actively part of investigating the on-going story. Great art, great style choices. Really well done, and well-thought-out game. Congrats!!