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This has a lot of potential, but i suggest more interactivity with characters like touch or being able to request them to talk with you dressing what you want or nothing at all, maybe showing some parts. Another point is progressively making the Main Character more daring, having him be only passive may get boring.

As for the UI i suggest a key for easily find clickable or interactables in the screen, some screen exits are not easy to locate and i think that is missing an exit in the spa on the ice bucket screen. 

A Quest journal would also be good, the book on the spa closet had no previously indication that was something accessible, having a lead to a fetch quest is a must.

That is all, good game, GL

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Hey LostKey!

Thanks for the suggestions, those are very much appriciated!

And yes, Keen will become more pro-active as the game progresses :)  This is actually very much connected to the plot of the game. But at this time there is only about 20% gameplay done, so yeah...that's why you won't notice Keens change yet.

And improving on the UI, is actually part of the next update! I agree, that there is room for improvement there :)

And eventually I  hope to add a Quest Journal to the game, but that's a tricky feature to add- especially  since it's a constantly evolving game. But meanwhile I'm working on a Walkthrough & hopefully that helps when all else fails :)

All the best!
-Robin