i'm not sure if it gets better, as i have not progressed past finding the elf in the tavern and the version that i'm playing is that of version 0.1a. But i find the grammar in the game slightly lacking, it's not egregious in how bad it is, but it's bad enough to turn me off, i don't expect the story telling skills of a highly publicised book series, but i do expect the grammatical skills of a fluent english writer. I know that you, Feyada may not be a native english speaker, but i do expect your translator(s) and editor(s) to at least be able to translate your script to something coherent and legible.
Though i haven't progressed much in the game, i do commend you on your art style from what i have seen so far and in your previews.
I will download version 0.2c as you have recently just made it available to download for the general public, and i hope that the grammar has been improved.