A pretty good start! That cliffhanger at the end is pretty mean tho xp.
I find music to be pretty important in a vn and it does the job. The main menu theme is gorgeous and theres one particular track thats cool and chill and I really like it. The mc's backstory is really interesting and I'm excited to see how the story progresses with the group of psychics.
It's definitely a unique and interesting premise and im looking forward to seeing where this project goes!