This is coming along nicely. The artwork really helps here. In class, please remind me to teach you all how to add sound effects. I think something like this could be used in key areas. You already have a strong sense of surprise and suspense in your choices, the wording, and now images. I would look around in OpenGameArt.org for a few sound effects to bring in. Also, I would suggest to look for some suspenseful or abstract-looking Twine games here on itch, so that you look for functionality to add. I can tailor some of my content that you and every one want to do next, so bring me questions :)