Oh no, I died! But this was fun. Great job! You've given the player some good opportunities for making choices and giving some variables to help motivation for for how we make choices. I know this is just a loose sketch but you're doing great with experimenting and stringing together an adventurous storyline. Take a crack at adding an image next and maybe some text-styles to spice up what you've got going on. It's simple but effective and fun!