You’ve got strong storytelling skills and I think they really come out in your game. I could see this game doing really well with just some simple coding tricks and a strong art style. It makes me think about exploring story through emotional choices and the player’s connection to characters and if that would influence game mechanics. I’d love to see how sound might enhance this game, either some snippets from a song fading in and out, or just a few sound effects. Great work! I’m looking forward to playing more!