These days my attention span is hanging on by a thread but I was glued to this story through all 53 pages. I realize that "reading the whole thing" barely constitutes a compliment, but I mean it when I say I haven't been this stimulated by a piece of media in a while. The jokes killed just as hard as the tragedy did. The suspense you weaved into the lives of the side characters and the main trio couldn't have accumulated into a better payoff. Seriously dude, amazing work. Would love to see more short stories from you.