This was actually really good. At points you become completely engrossed in the story and you want to know what happens next. Obviously there are spelling mistakes here and there, but after a while your brain just corrects them. There was a scene that irked me a bit and that was the one where Marco is holding the gun to you know who's head and the gun is completely empty yet he still fires it, but other than that it was great. Would definitely watch a movie adaptation. Well done.