With cute aesthetics and a lovable plot, this game was pleasant for me to play. Still, I think I spend more time playing with coming up for names for my protagonist than reading (it's quite a short game).
At least you have the motivation to at least make something, I think with that it makes you more creative than some of us (including me :l).
With this very short review aside, I give your game 8/10 IGN points.