I like the premise, of taking a basic concept and revisiting an expanded version of it. However, though the expanded concept is interesting in its own way, it's a bit short, and I feel like it was a bit lacking. Oh, and something about this reminded me of IF games(as in, with a parser).
Also, how did you do the music in the browser? I tried to get that to work for my game, Literate, but I couldn't...
(Yes, I did the WAG Challenge too! You can find my game, Literate, here: http://itch.io/jam/wag-challenge/rate/29610)