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A list of potential improvements in here:

  • You should make avatars for the characters.
  • Fix spelling errors. "thier" is not a word, and words start with big letters.
  • It's the Level 5 Overseers. Not the Zero-Five people. Acknowledge this..
  • There are multiple stray black pixels that should be corrected.
  • The game is confusing and could be improved.

3/5. Pretty good art.

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  • It’s still a small game that was mostly made to test a few things hence the lack of avatars for now.
  • I haven’t noticed all the spelling errors just because staring at text for hours on end really makes that hard sometimes. +I am pretty sure I did use an O not a zero in that but I might need to go edit my font to make it more clear.

Thank you for the criticism.

actually they are also called the 05, well not the 05 people per say but 05 is their definition of sorts. so that complaint is a bit of a moot point , yeah i can see the pixel problems and thoose black pixels randomly arround . gameboy music was never great to begin with, and also some small grammar mistakes arrent gonna be noticed by almost anyone. and also the pixel-ish text could have caused you to see words differently

The new beta fixed a lot of that somewhat by being able to preview it better. Figure ill eventually update this game more using the new engine.