Fun read! I love the world building and the cast of characters.
Some things I noticed, for people thinking about giving this a read:
1) The text needs some editing/polishing up; there are often typos, like using the wrong their/there/they're or to/too/two, and some words/sentences not being punctuated or spelled correctly.
2) This might just be a personal preference, or maybe it could be a story pacing issue, but sometimes it feels like a very very long time before I get to make another choice. But that's not necessarily a bad thing, this is one of those VNs that reads more like... well, a novel, than a choose-your-own-adventure where you can build your own protagonist.
Just my two cents, still enjoyed the game and recommend reading it :)!