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OK! I got the Game Running on an old HP Laptop. I won't allow the Tendrils of Google or Microsoft, anywhere NEAR my main System. The concept is good. It integrates smoothly into the MISFILE Universe. The Art and the Characters, are everything I've come to expect. Not your fault, but it is what it is. It's a Test-of-Concept: Exploring quickly becomes Grinding, largely because of the Music. Again not your fault. There is not enough Story to bear the repetition. There is potential here. [and possible Cross-Pollination.] I half expect to see Anya and Maya, [or their Clones,] in the Pages of Hell High.

ConsiderThis- The Game is limited by involving the Player as Generic Dead Male #1.  A simple expansion would be to allow for Generic Dead Female #1 to be met by Clones of Sid[ney] and Grecko, or Demons to-be-named-later. This is an RPG! Allow the Player to chose the Character they are playing, and you instantly have [Rough- back-of-the-envelope Calculation,] that's 3 or 4 times as many possible outcomes to script [Oh Joy!] and that's without Demonic Gender Fluidity.

That's a simple Tweak, and mainly a lot of additional Art [which is what you are good at.] Now ConsiderThis:

o Let the Player choose a Character to Play [Angel OR Demon] and have them face a Legion of Recently Dead, who must all be ... Processed.

o  They could start as Gate-Keepers/Poachers Like Maya and Anya and work their way up in the Celestial Filing Depot [or the "Rival Corporation."

o In the process, You can gradually introduce elements-

Mind numbing Regulations, Balky Automatic "Safeties," Sporadic, Lock-downs, and Inspections, from The 2nd Circle, "Training" Seminars, Misfiled Documents, Interoffice Memos, and Cryptic Stickt-Em Notes.

You Certainly have enough Material to work with! With enough backing, from the collective programming Talent on Napalm Luck, you have enough story for a Sandbox World [Ambitious,] or at least a Browser Game  like Pocket Nightmares.

-Avatar BØmar