heya. Thanks for the love on the writing. That game error is because you used an old save game. If you're gonna start that chapter, hit New game and choose the chapter again and you should be good
DOH. Now I feel like an idiot, LOL. You HAVE said that before, I don't know why I missed it. Thanks - that fixed the issue.
And more "love on the writing" -- your development of characters is awesome this chapter. ALL characters. I'm beginning to wonder how much of YOU is being exposed here :) Truly a great work!
Now ... about cliff hanger endings ....