This was not at all what I was expecting, and that is a good thing! Superb quality, writing, story, art. Please do not change the art or writing style. This is fantastic. And earlier you said this was only like 1/100th of what you want it to be...just wow. Keep up the FANTASTIC work.
All the art = fantastic, even the backgrounds. Do not cut any corners later, please, this is so good.
my only 2 gripes are things I am sure that are not even close to finished so I am patiently watching this project. You have something special here, this is much much deeper then just some Hgame.