good work! but since you asked for feedback here it is:
I really like the overall harmony on this one, is risky, but i feel like could be improved by probably changing some notes here and there, i feel it wanders a little to my taste, so maybe focusing to strengthen the core ideas could give you the cohesion i feel is lacking
Thank you so much for your feedback! It is greatly appreciated!
I also agree that it’s a risky take since it’s my first time making anything of this type and I’m still so new to composing so it brings me joy to know that you enjoyed this little piece that I made.
I’ll definitely work on more arrangements too!
I’ll work harder and improve for the future!