I will be honest - this game really has potential. The artstyle is original and aesthetic, even though I would suggest working on perfectioning the lines and aim for a cleaner look. Evren is well drawn, catches attention easily. I also appreciate the horror parts, it really sets the mood and is an interesting addition.Though there are some things I would suggest working on - 1. Storyline. I think it's a little shallow. We don't get much info, and we're jumping from one thing to another. It feels really rushed and chaotic. 2 . Romance and Evren. I would like to know more about him. It feels really unnatural - one day we meet, then I'm able to kiss him without knowing anything about him. I think slower events and building it to the intimacy would make it so much better. There is also one thing that confuses me. After choosing the NSFW option, we get an ending where it says we're filthy, disgusting etc. I think you should choose one side and stick with it. No NSFW content? Fine, but then don't shame people that like the stuff. Overall, the game has a chance to be a good visual novel in the future.