This has such a charming style, and I'm personally (the team member writing this) an absolute sucker for the big chunky PC98-esque borders. I do fear that I missed a lot of dialogue, though, because despite selecting English, a large number of lines (mostly Iris's) were untranslated, and some of the dialogue just wasn't translated correctly. I don't hold that against you, though, because I know translation is a huge pain and can never be truly perfect. The rest of what's here is pretty great despite that, and FACE absolutely killed it with the soundtrack. I hope more people can read this, too, because I can tell you care a lot about the story you're trying to tell.
Congrats on the release!