the story was pretty interesting espically with the whole eye entity stuff and "seeing yourself dying through the eyes of someone else"
there were some typos there and there and sometimes where a line that was supposed to be said by ui was said by saki, and the other way around, but hey the game was rushed after all
so yeah, the game was neat as a simple and short experience :)
Hello! Thanks for your feedback!
So about the typos, yeah unfortunately there are lots... But that's fair because the most rushed thing in this game was writing AND music. But I hope that you still kind of enjoyed this experience!
I will try to take art more seriously ( I already am practicing anatomy ) and hope that my new game will be better!