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Luriel, your game has amazing graphics and great characters, respect!!! Still, it also has quite a lot of typos and some grammar problems. I thought maybe I could help you with corrections, pls let me know if you are interested. At any rate, great job!!!

Hi Munichorn, first of all thanks for your words, and thank you very much for the offer, I know there are several grammatical errors, since the game is written in Spanish (My native language) and then a translator is in charge of the translation, I think there is where the error occurs, anyway, after publishing Chapter 10, I will review the entire first season (from chapter 1 to 10) and correct the errors, as well as remaster some images from the first chapters. Thanks again for your offer, I will keep it in mind. Hug

Luriel, I really would love to help you with this game. No money expected, consider me a volunteer. Just let me know. Take care, M.