*minor spoiler warning, read it first!*
This was great. I really loved that both of the main characters could be considered good, or at least had good intentions that made sense. Those intentions were just simply incompatible. Despite what Maurizio did in the end, I still ended up resonating with him more than Demetrio. Part of it was that the narrative was told through his perspective, and part of it was also that I genuinely believe in what he (or you, the writer) are trying to say about human pain and how important it is. I'm glad you wrote about this.
The art is absolutely gorgeous, it looks like you've gotten more skilled! The piece where Demetrio is laying in bed had so much emotion in it (or...lack-thereof in his case). The voice acting was great too! Will be thinking about this game for a while.