really cool fangame!! could use some tightening up in the writing, especially IRT grammar - noticed a lot of missing apostrophes and uncapitalized proper nouns. there are a few other writing nitpicks i came out with, but i'll save that for if i'm actually prompted LOL. if you want some constructive criticism lmk
overall, seems like it has a ton of potential, i'm excited to see where it goes! i'll definitely check out the full release, and good luck to you with making it! (:
(also, if you ever post that sprite of the zapper jumping happily anywhere... let me know... it's so cute i just want to have it on my computer...)