Thanks for playing it, and for the read. "Do not read into it" landing right next to what he actually says is the exact beat the whole thing is built on, so it's good to hear it hit.
All three notes are real, and two are mine to fix:
- The sound toggle on the advance tap: moving it. Flipping your sound mid-scene without you choosing it is just a bug.
- The choice. You should have hit one. If none appeared, that is not a design call, it is a break, and it is the worst thing to find in a game about your reading mattering. I think it is the same root as your third note (the choice row renders below the fold and taps advance past it), so pinning the first line and pulling the choice up is one fix.
- Opening line scrolling off the top: pinning it.
I'll ping you when the new build is up. Then tell me if the reading feels like yours.
Swap: yes. Send me Moth and I'll play it and tell you where I got stuck.