Very short but shows great potential. I for one really enjoyed playing this. I liked the graphics and enjoyed the story, I found it very compelling. Being able to play the game via joystick is great as it allowed me to play using a handheld device running a C64 emulator, (Vice+JiffyDOS). I am really looking forward to you releasing a full game in this style. Great Work!
Forgot to say I liked the font used as it is very clean and easy to read.