this comment is frying me so hard because the in-depth confusion explanation and then the end is oh yeah evren is hot
Thank you tho these are good points ☺️
I'm pretty passionate about vn's and I had seen a reel of your game show up on my ig page and decided to play! I hope you didn't feel hurt by the critique but I see potential in this and by adding more to this game lore and plot wise will help you in the long run. Also, I could ask the doctor who Vanessa is, despite me not even knowing who Vanessa is, so that also confused me regarding the plotline. like ??? why give us this dialogue option without any background to how we know this vanessa character? But the scene between Rov and Evern was the best imo because we get a lot of background information about the two characters. And I wish our friends were more included in the plotline as well! Happy coding ^^
i think the reason is why is because youre supposed to find out about vanessa through certain choices. i noticed that some incomplete information in some routes are completed through different routes. idk i like how its not complete and you get to piece it all together through different playthroughs sjdhfjs
but the thing is when there are dialogue options for a character I didn't know existed in my route, I feel lost. I'm not against playing multiple routes to figure out the full story, but when a vn does that it has to executed well by giving each route ENOUGH story sprinkled throughout the whole thing. That is my critique, I don't know who Vanessa is throughout my play through, and I should've, because I had the option to ask.